| Reviews for Out of Time |
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Abhyank 1/13/10 . chapter 1"Please don't hate me for what I do But if you must, on you I'll accuse no blame Because in the end I had to hurt you... I'm sorry that you ever heard my name. But I know that you'll be happier that You can live your life to its prime And hopefully soon you'll forget this spat And simply know I ran out of time." hey it was really a nice array of emotes which constituted and explained every para on its own :) but last 2 para seemed to contradict each other..coz u know she cant live happier without u..even then u make her feel free by making her feel guilty that you will not blame her if she blames u..:) but overall this poem was nice |