Reviews for Making a Mockery
YohKo Bennington 1/13/10 . chapter 1
Nice ;D
East-0f-Eden 1/13/10 . chapter 1
that is so sweet.
jeffiesterlin 1/13/10 . chapter 1
Wow. This is really good!

"So you make a mockery of love.

With knees buckling, cheeks flushed…

You insist completely that nothing

Will make your red heart rush."

I think that was definetley my favouirite stanza. You have a great talent for writing! :) (fck yesO:D)
Love Frog 1/13/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful, :) sounds like me sometimes.
PlatinumRoseLady 1/13/10 . chapter 1
Very powerful, and so very true.