I love the lay out of the poem and also the recurring use of the word "it" and how it progressively changes meaning throughout the poem. I can feel the strength of the emotion behind the words, too! Great work once again :)

-applause- Very nice. -cocky grin- I know how THIS feels all right. You put this one together most superbly. Very nice captuer of emotions; the use of language made the poem not only bitter, but positively acrid and stinging. I like it QUITE a lot.

Loved "IT"...I think I can honestly say that more than half the girls in the world right now (and maybe like 10 percent of boys) would be cheering you on after reading this poem!

Amazing.

I love how the word 'it' changes meaning thoughout the whole peice.

You certainly have an amazing talent. Sorry I haven't review in so long. You're still doing a wonderfully good job.