The rhythm of most of this is really good, it kinda bounces along. But the stanzas:

"Im supposed to be mourning

But it’s early in the morning

And I’ve got meetings with clients

Who, unlike you, are reliable" have a rougher rhythm, it kinda broke my concentration(is that the right word? I think I mean absorption but that seems even less apt.).

Jack

This is very unique! It's not my type of lyrics, but I enjoyed reading through it!

Good work!

Angela Nichole :)