It all happens in a coffee shop! ;)

Love the story (apart from a few gramatical errors). Without expressing so, you can imagine the looks on their faces at every turn.

Well done.

Wow... its ..really nice...

bdw..thnx for d review. I'm new here so i really don't now how it works in here. And don't be sad abt Jerusha...things are gonna get VERY interestin!

By the author of story-"Party at Jerusha's place"

I really like this! Amazing how we can feel so dull and unimportant on the inside and be so brave and full of glamor on the outside. I love the way you find the color in a shabby world!

This review is by the author of "The Charity Chronicles!"

An exquisite first story of luv

Not bad for a first story on FP! I look forward to reading more!

Hey.

Good start to your story. The first chapter is quite interesting. The only thing I noticed were a few grammar mistakes and spelling errors. But apart from that it was nice.

Looking forward to reading more!

Oh, and thanks for the review by the way!