I quite enjoyed reading this! I would end it with the interogation but that is just me. Anyway well done, keep up the good work! :)

Normally I don't care for poems with excessively long lines, because OCD Dusk is OCD. Or something like that. *shot* BUT, it did work incredibly well for this poem. I had to re-read it a few times, because it's one of those pieces that make you put your finger on your chin and think for a bit. Or maybe I'm just slow like that. *shotted moar*