I dont know if your actually talking a ciggerate and exaggerating it or a person that makes you feel this way. Either or. Very addicting :) made me want to take a puff and see the feeling you described lol. Read and review some of mine if you have the chance! :)

The first line of the poem definitely drew me in. It's kind of sad but everyone more or less goes through it, don't they? Good job! -JSM

'It slips in between my fingers

and it can break my heart'

Simple, but very powerful.

The emotions are so raw in this.

I think it sounds better without the 'but' in the last line. Really like this piece.