this is beautiful! great lyrics

Loved the verses. Very fluid, rhyming, and full of meaning. The chorus, coulda had more. You know what I mean. I understand it, but it needs to flow well like the verses do. Don't worry, I'm just glad you are writing again! Good song, keep him crankin'! :D

ANOTHER absolutely amazing song! keep it up! and i've been posting a lot of stuff lately so you should check those out and tell me what you think :)