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| Casino Kat 1/20/10 . chapter 1
Very sad. But fantastically written. Your use of words really captured my attention. :)
| Ms.Sweet Pea 1/16/10 . chapter 1
haunting poem. very good. Id see why you want to die first before your lover does. keep writing! Can you check out my poem please :) 'one too many mistakes'
| KCanna 1/16/10 . chapter 1
Dude... you just ruined my day! D:
But it is pretty depressing. Possibly because it's true.
I like the repetition of the last three lines.
In all honesty, this is too short and sad for me to give a major critique, so I apologize :P But good job writing it!
I'm gonna go watch some happy movies now.
| Gone with the tide 1/15/10 . chapter 1
This is so sad, but so sweet. The repetition is used very well, too. I love it!
| blueSKIES247 1/15/10 . chapter 1
really good. the repetition is a nice effect. really good.