I liked it :) I can relate to most of the things you've written, and it's good to be able to relate in my mind :)

There was one grammar mistake, it should've been go instead of goes in the line that says "There goes my dreams". Just in case no one mentioned. But otherwise, I'm loving everything you've written so far :)

Mariah xoxo

Reminds me of something I went through.

I like the rhyming. I can really connect to the emotions. Good Job.

Sad, but beautiful. Good job.