This is so cute!

How did you come up with these names?

I hope you are planning to continue!

This is really cool and imaginative, definitely finish it! Grammar etc needs perfecting but otherwise i like it.

Cool monster! But she shouldn't be making people forget things. What do monsters want with things we forget?

I wouldn't try to catch a monster! It shouldn't have followed her outside. She should have let it go where her mom could see it.