|Reviews for Black Lotus|
| FlynMoose 1/20/10 . chapter 1
Your writing is unique and almost haunting. I love it!
| Burnin Heart 1/19/10 . chapter 1
Really enjoyed this piece.. the only criticism I have however is that I thought the word 'demigods' just didn't seem to fit. The syllables are too harsh and short. Just an opinon though. Liked the rest of it!
| Belladonna Snow 1/19/10 . chapter 1
lovely. I really enjoyed this peice, good work
| TheEvilAshleyness 1/19/10 . chapter 1
Okay so this has a really interesting plot to it but I would like to see it flow more smoothly I don't care if it rhymes I don't care in that way but it just seems like it should flow in a regular beat you know what I'm saying?