Reviews for the new icarus
Tranquil Thorns 1/20/10 . chapter 1
Effective choice of words, especially for such a short poem. I haven't much to add by way of criticism; I just liked the idea of Icarus as a girl.
Vanity Means Nothingness 1/19/10 . chapter 1
Well, this may just be my favourite 56 words ever. Very lovely, with a nice thought. Great imagery for such a short piece. And I really just love the icarus reference. A lot.

Vanity.