You're really great with this kind of stuff! I read a few of your other poems as well.

This one gives a good description of how life, love and the world in general changes over time. Er, I mean, I think that's what it describes; I have zero poetry in me, I admire your talent.

Excellent work! )

I feel pain from this poem, it makes me want to cry. The change in life and love,and not a good change. Powerful and in so few words.

Sigh, how I hate change. I like your use of words in this poem, everything seems to fit together very well :)

Amazing. In only a few words you have captured so much pain and frustration. I felt my heart sinking as I read your poem. It is a pain we all know. 'What was once forever is now not at all' is perfect and ends the poem perfectly. You have quite a real talent for capturing emotions and putting them into words.