|Reviews for In the Valley|
| Archia 10/7/12 . chapter 1
I loved the beautiful picture it painted, and it was like a peaceful, simple place. Really nicely done. I like how it keeps the same structure in whole way. Great poem.
| Freelancer Writer 5/21/11 . chapter 1
What does it teaches us? It's just a picture? Work on it, explore love in the inside, you've described the outside only. It's just a tip, follow if you like.
Keep working on it
| Malone 1/23/10 . chapter 1
Very descriptive, I like it.