|Reviews for The Merchant Prince and the Thief|
| Guest 2/16/13 . chapter 7
ouu good this is getting good! please continue! :)
haha im just waiting for when elias becomes impressed with xile's skills ;) heh.
| twilightserius 2/5/13 . chapter 1
wow this is interesting and i like reading it
| blackkitties 2/4/13 . chapter 7
me like, cant wait for more :P
| Talana K-T 10/15/10 . chapter 6
oh please, can you update? I love this Both characters are so much fun. Please update?
| deerka-m 10/9/10 . chapter 6
Ohoh, this is quite the lovely story if I do say so myself! I love Xile, he's such a quirky little trickster. And I really like Elias' character, too, even though he gives off the impression of a hard-ass.
I hope you update at some point, that would be awesome.
| Allanasha Ke Kiri 9/6/10 . chapter 6
Just found this, and I have to say, I hope you're planning on posting more. I'm enjoying the chapter, and the characters.
| yesplease 4/23/10 . chapter 5
Love this story so far! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten as many reviews as one would think. It has great potential, and I just can't wait to see what the next stage is with Xile and Elias. Hope for an update soon. Cheers.
| Elezbed 3/27/10 . chapter 3
Well i think that Elias is beginning to suspect the truth !
I wonder what is going to happen next...
Good chanter and write more!
| Happy Cereal 2/6/10 . chapter 2
Ooh, great second chapter! The characters already seem well-rounded and you can really visualize them. The descriptions were great in that they weren't too verbose nor were they too simplistic. Was a bit short, but really enjoyed it, especially Elias! (hee!)
| Happy Cereal 1/24/10 . chapter 1
Really great start, loved the descriptions. Pace could be a bit slower, but other than that, great job! Can't wait to read more!