ouu good this is getting good! please continue! :)

haha im just waiting for when elias becomes impressed with xile's skills ;) heh.

wow this is interesting and i like reading it

me like, cant wait for more :P

oh please, can you update? I love this Both characters are so much fun. Please update?

Ohoh, this is quite the lovely story if I do say so myself! I love Xile, he's such a quirky little trickster. And I really like Elias' character, too, even though he gives off the impression of a hard-ass.

I hope you update at some point, that would be awesome.

Just found this, and I have to say, I hope you're planning on posting more. I'm enjoying the chapter, and the characters.

Love this story so far! I'm surprised it hasn't gotten as many reviews as one would think. It has great potential, and I just can't wait to see what the next stage is with Xile and Elias. Hope for an update soon. Cheers.

Well i think that Elias is beginning to suspect the truth !

I wonder what is going to happen next...

Good chanter and write more!

Ooh, great second chapter! The characters already seem well-rounded and you can really visualize them. The descriptions were great in that they weren't too verbose nor were they too simplistic. Was a bit short, but really enjoyed it, especially Elias! (hee!)

Really great start, loved the descriptions. Pace could be a bit slower, but other than that, great job! Can't wait to read more!