Great story! Some of the chapters were weaker than others, but hey you need chapters like that. Can't wait for the second book!

I did not expect that twist! Great work!

Good story! Angel seems really concerned for her.

Interesting start here. The preface really caught my attention. I feel ready bad for Karina.

I absolutely loved Fallen and can hardly wait for the sequel.

Really interesting. I think that, from all that stories that I've read on Angels, this was on of the best interpretations of them. The story was sweet, funny, sad, suspenseful and amayzing!

This story is amazing! I'm jealous of how modern you can be, I can't do the modern mix very well:/

THE WHOLE STORY IS BRILLIANT

PLEASE POST A NOTE WHEN YOU UPDATE RISEN

Could you post a note when you upload the sequel?(:

soooooooo curious abit Karina's name!

Omggggg! I loved this story! Ur a really great writer! When is Risen going to come out? It has a summary in ur bio its still not thereee!its been a year, when r ya going to write itttttt! HURRRY UPPP!

The paragraph that starts, "What about my face do you find funny," isn't written in first person like the rest of your book.

I like what you've written so far!

I know I've probably written a review or some form of feedback for this chapter but I come back to your story to gain solace.

You misspelled choked twice. Above.

Sincerely,

Leland.

ToT NOU *clicks to readmoar*

i'd be annoyed with him, too! as an angel, it must be very serious for him to sin. not knowing Shakespeare is a SIN! *sobs dramatically* hehe

omg. my friends and i were *and still are* just as odd and corny with eachother in highschool. instant fave! love the sarcasm and wit in this-i laughed a bit too loud at the twilight reference. my cat left me. D: