|Reviews for Insatiable: Ice|
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 2/11/10 . chapter 3
Great! I love your metaphors!
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 2/11/10 . chapter 2
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell 2/11/10 . chapter 1
Great! I love it!
| Isca 1/28/10 . chapter 3
"Fall to me and fall on me." Stunning! "Fall to me" is just brilliant.
"It's almost too much to bear." Angsty. I like it.
"We are grains of sand in that hourglass." Beautiful final line. :)
| Isca 1/28/10 . chapter 2
"The night sky bright with the
waxing moon and Venus
as the morning star.
I tremble slightly."
This was my favourite part. The evening star/morning star imagery blew my mind. I like to think of those two stars as lovers, myself. I liked the "I tremble" part too-it's fitting after such awe-inspiring celestial imagery. Keep up the good work. :)
| Isca 1/28/10 . chapter 1
"You make me naked." I like this line-as if Reaper is capable of transporting the speaker back to the moment in Eden when nakedness was nothing to be ashamed of.