Hey! Good job! I can't wait to read more!

YEAH, NEW STORY!

Woah, Woah, Woah! The guy is loco! I would rather become a werewolf.

But anyways, it sounds very good so far. Even tho the transformation was really fast. The characters: I like the girl than the guy. Cause the dude is crazy. XD But anyways, i hope we find out more about the chari want cause i do. I want to know why he wants power and etc, how they get together, and etc. But i have to read the next chapter. xp Which is not up. XD but anyways, i hope you update and see wat's going on. :D

Wow. That's pretty amazing!