|Reviews for happiness|
| melodyrose9 12/3/12 . chapter 1
| arcianking112 3/13/10 . chapter 1
very nice, short sweet and it makes you think.
| sealednectar 3/6/10 . chapter 1
This was so lovely. It was really beautiful! The ending made me smile.
| mixed up mess 2/26/10 . chapter 1
Apart from some tiny punctuation mistakes, I thought it was amazing. I like the description, especially how you managed to fit the word bitterness in and the poem is thought provoking and beautiful
| Punslinger 2/22/10 . chapter 1
A very lovely, well-written poem showing how we can help other people just by being ourselves. The last line is quite touching.
| Isca 2/18/10 . chapter 1
"How do you do it? Living each day." Wow. I love this opening line; the angsty tone here is palpable.
Concrit: I'd space the words better (e.g. some words are stuck to the commas where they shouldn't be). I'd also make little stanzas.
Keep writing. :)