|Reviews for Man in the Shadows|
| Anna Cate 3/16/10 . chapter 1
What a beginning! You definitely have the reader's attention with that first line. What body? Who was that man? Who's Mindy? What's going to happen next? Great story so far!
| him 1/28/10 . chapter 1
wow that was cool! i'd probably say to just slow down a little, because everything seems to move quite quickly, but i guess you could say that in a positive way too! awesomeness!
| May Elizabeth 1/26/10 . chapter 1
This left me curious about what would happen next. It's nice to see you posting here again. I used to be Raven Tiger.
| Briony Lancaster 1/26/10 . chapter 1
It's interesting, your description creates a strong visual image, without being too long-winded. It's instantly more engaging than my story, I think I might have to try and follow your example.
I'd love to see more.
I'm sorry I couldn't write a longer review, I can't think of much other than "exciting"!