I have to say, it's nice too see something in Historical that isn't about some girl in the 17th century falling for some guy. Swear to god, ninety percent of the content under Historical follows that idea.

This is a great story! You are leaving us in suspense by ending where you did. I can't wait to find out what he reveals!

This is a great story, I love it! Please continue and good job! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

This seems really interesting. I can't wait to read more. :)

Mr. Muller had a little "You stupid runts! Get off my lawn!" moment, huh? xD

Great chapter with more of the scary Mr. Muller. He intrigues me as much as Rose.

But, the paragraph which starts "She chuckled," next time, you should indent the dialogue so it's not squished up.

All in all, I can't wait for the next chappy!

An intriguing start to this story, with an appealing narrator. Looking forward to what comes next.

Yay! I was glad to see this updated. I really love the old lady, but I have a feeling that her past won't be very pretty. I already have a thought in mind!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, what a great start. Just by the description of the man had me holding my breath. I can't see what happens next.

By the way, I noticed that only people who have accounts can review this. If you allow anonymous reviews also, I'm sure you will get double the feedback!

Please update soon :D