Omg I literally could not stop reading. Your descriptions are so awesome and I just loved the way you wrote. Paul and Mandy are so sweet together. I will definitely be reading more of your stories :)

I LOVE your story so far :D Your descriptions are just so awesome and the plot seems super interesting. Can't wait to keep reading

Oh my, this story was wonderfully crafted. I really enjoyed reading this work of art.
I would really love to read your first published novel, but I don't have Amazon's e-book program. If you ever decide to start publishing with Kobo Writing Life (I've read a bunch of great self published novels from Kobo Books! It's my go-to for e-reading!), please let me know! I'll upload all of your future novels!

nice story

I'm going to do the smart thing and actually go to bed tonight. I'm loving the story so far, and plan to return to it tomorrow. Here's my bookmark!

Loved this too. (: my favorite is the werewolf one right now though. I love your writing!

You have yet to describe Mandy. For example Paul (out of all the names in the world?) well he was looking at Mandy saying how she was so attractive because of her sparkling or something or another and I'm reading and am like "What?" are you gonna describe what she looks like. 6es we know she's attractive, but so is half of the world. What does she look like? Brown hair, blonde hair, blue eyes or even green eyes. I like to picture the characters in my mind and can't very well do that without knowing what they look like. My mind wonders, next thing you know I'll be imagining her with purple hair and antlers. C'mon, I'm dyin' to know! Please!

Ooooh! I love how the ending gives lots of space for the reader's imagination. 3

Usually, the last comment for all your stories is the same 'Awww!' or "So cute!" which is all true, it's just that it may get boring. :) But in truth I just love all your stories, though some more than others. Anyway, I absolutely love them all. 3

Uberliscious!

:'(

If your story is going to contain religious bull, maybe you should leave a warning for the readers.

I think this is the last story I can read for a very long time unfortunately, I really must do some study! Your stories make that very difficult and I'm sure that this won't be true and you'll be hearing from me in another coupld of days :P

Anyway, sorry about the ramblings, let's get on to the story. I know that I read about a third of this story before and was even reviewing it but then got uber busy. The rest of it was really good though! I loved reading about how much Mandy and Paul loved each other, it was super-cute, especially what the two were willing to give up for the other.

I very much enjoyed it, it was good and the whole concept was really good. I think the description of Satan was particularly interesting. Not what I was expecting although I was expecting him to be handsome which you did state.

So yes, fantastic story and I will TRY and be good and study but we both know that's not going to happen...

Ho? Nicely written. I enjoyed this chapter very much so. Mandy seems to have accidentally stumbled upon something bigger than she could ever imagine. Thanks for writing!

Yet again, you know exactly how to end a chapter. Anyways, nice story. I'm really liking it so far. Thanks!

Haha, your good at writing the last lines of chapters. Paul's last comment made me smile. I liked the fact that she actually tried to borrow his wings only to realize that the were real, heh.

Thanks so much!