Loved it! Can't wait to see what he proposes to do about the sutuation and if she will go along with his plan...

very very interesting !

hope u update more soon.

Like it a lot, got an air of creepiness around Paul, wich only adds to his hidden side. Mandy seems to good for a man like Paul to be after, because of what she is 'destined' for.

As for crushes, I found out mine is clueless on reacting. I told him and he walked away silently, next week I tried to explain I wasn't being set up and he refused to stop and listen.

"Because I need you". A creepy, nice way to end the chapter, creepy but nice. I wonder how she will react to it, since she didn't seem to be phased by him following her.

i hate cliffhangers lol but they make it so good. a movie i once watched said that you have to keep an audience wanting more and have them interested for the 1st moment. i have to say that all of your stories do that. once again thank you for helping me escape :D keep up the good work Lady Femme Fatale

“Because I need you.”

Wonder what her reaction to that will be.

-Liz :D

love it

OK, so I have to say that I love Paul's dark mysteriousness because even though we know what he is and what he wants, Mandy doesn't and the way you describe him is totally cool. Makes him seem even more dangerous, which isn't necessarily a bad thing :D

I do have to feel sorry for him though because all he wants to be is human but he can only achieve it by doing something inhumane. A bit difficult for him I should say and I'm guessing things are just going to get harder for him.

As for your question about finding out how your crush likes you, I have no idea. I'm pretty dense and clueless about that sort of stuff and my friends find it a wee bit frustrating... Although I suppose sometimes you just get the feeling, like they start talking to you more than to others, they talk to you about stuff and just generally pay you more attention than is normal. Ugh, I'm terrible at explaining and I'm not even sure that made sense but yeah...

Interesting story so far... I hope it doesn't become a love triangle or something...

Update soon!

I'd be a bit more freaked out if some random guy with wings was following me.

Kitten

adoarable x

huh. i thought her reaction to his wings would be more like "oh my god! who has wings? you arent human!" maybe shes in shock?

thanks for the update!

I don't know if you answered this question before, but i am going to ask it anyways-Does this story take place in the same world as Stop the World?

The master of one liner's has come to fiction press...in the form of a demon with wings. Apparently they don't teach many social skills where he's from.

Can't say that a whole lot happened, but I found it rather amusing, probably not the greatest start to her day though.