"You're not mythical, not by any means." I love that the tone of this line is mystical, and yet, "not by any means" is contradictory, and suggests that this other woman is very much mortal.

I like your allusions to powerful Greek goddesses: Hera and Aphrodite.

This is my favourite part of the poem:

"Legs that stretch as high as mountains.

I may very well have Cupid’s arrow

lodged in my chest."

Keep up the good work.

I loved this. Great job.