'my mouth still wants to say your name./ my legs still walk in sync with yours walking away.'

i just love the wording. it's powerful, in a very subtle way.

This really brought tears to my eyes. Wow. It was so moving and touching, and the way you painted it was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. I think it's a situation almost anyone can relate to. Great job.

this is everything i'm feeling right now. you took the words right from my mouth.

"my mouth still wants to say your name."

yesyes.

i love this. it sounds like a familiar feeling that most can relate to. well done :]

I like the gentle rhymes and how utterly simple this seems. good job.

I love it. It captures the sense of attraction and longing really well, even if that person has moved on. As for the structure, I REALLY like how the first line rhymes, and I like the rhythm of the first stanza. And I like the "legs walking in sync" line, that's great. Well done :)

This is beautiful. Bravo!