I really liked this.

The words you chose were perfect, 'orchestrated' and 'fillet' are memorable.

x,

sealednectar

that is awesome! :o

really really emotional and meaningful.

loved it

Insom-

so deliciously colourful, but painful too. i luv the lines "slashing each other with double-edged swords...to fillet each other's hearts". that's so graphic without going to the extremes, but it still paints a picture. love the concept of the internal battle. great job! :)

I absolutely loved the last four lines :)

missed your work