I like this, I can feel this, have felt it before. I love the way you put feelings to words, you do it so well and it appears to be effortless though it may not be. Keep it up.

i liked this poem...you really captured the essence of fear and the ending is great. It gives the reader a sense that things will be ok. The whole thing flows nicely. Good job keep it up! :)

You know that I love this poem. I know what it is like to see the end and wonder about it when it does not actually come. This time that I read it, I could not help but get a different sense from it. Almost as if once the panic has passed, there is just a little bit of disappointment over the outcome. Maybe that is just me reading too much into it though.

Brilliantly written, you get all the amotions brilliantly, it's makes you shiver so it's good.

very nicely done with being directly to the point. you capture emotion very nicely in this, creating vivid imagery. Nicely done.

Nicely done, clear emotions to capture that single moment of fearful uncertintly. Good Work.