Ooh... this was a very naiice poem, indeed! Very powerful and effective, with lotsa meaning to it! Am luurving your rhyming pattern, too. ; D

Wow... i liked it! (

Aww... :( so sad! Ur really good writing though, though the rhyming was a little generic and predictable, it'd be better if you used a larger vocabulary, cos I know u have one! :)