| Reviews for Haiku Collection: Moods |
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Nahaylem 10/2/10 . chapter 9Read all. I was wondering about the word "desire" If I'm right, then it had three syllables, and it's throwing the count of the Haiku off. If I'm wrong, I apologize. My favorite was Insignificance. |
Cloudshika 8/2/10 . chapter 4I like the wonderment and Insignificance ones. But they all are very good :) usually i won't even look at Haikus, but yours are very good |
tannyapple 6/5/10 . chapter 9these are really good :D my favourite so far though has to be 'Insignificance' it was really emotive and powerful tanny apple xx |
nickyO 4/2/10 . chapter 8A fitting description of the emotion. |
nickyO 3/26/10 . chapter 7I really like this one. It is easy to get trapped in our own perceptions, and I like your take on Hope. Good job. |
nickyO 3/18/10 . chapter 5I like this one, interesting analogy. |
nickyO 3/18/10 . chapter 6love the rhyme an tone |
PyroPsycho x-x 2/11/10 . chapter 5Really good but sad. |
sealednectar 2/4/10 . chapter 5Really good. Makes you feel like such a small person in the greater scheme of things. Very good. (Reminds me of Titanic, for the sole reason that you use the word 'lifeboat'). Keep writing!:D |
nickyO 2/4/10 . chapter 4I like the duality in that last word. Legacy - is it your own past's legacy that is effecting your future actions? And then there is the legacy of your current or future actions on yourself and others. |
sealednectar 2/3/10 . chapter 4Really lovely. Many people wish they will do something in their life that will be a 'legacy', yet they are forgotten. My favourite line is the last one. A very good haiku! Keep writing. :) |
nickyO 1/31/10 . chapter 2My fav out of the three so far, I think because the third line breaks in thought from the the first two lines in the same breath that it relates to the first two lines. Lovely. |
sealednectar 1/31/10 . chapter 3This is the one that's got me wondering. I wonder what's going on here. I liked the words 'sweat' and 'freezes' next to each other. |
sealednectar 1/31/10 . chapter 2This one was very good too. It's true aswell. You shouldn't try to run away from youself. Keep it up. |
sealednectar 1/31/10 . chapter 1I really liked this one. My favourite part was 'grey paper', this evokes such wonderful images, a contrast against what we usually hear, a fresh/ white/ blank page. Good job. |