Wow... just wow. I am proud of knowing you. This is amazing. Passage of times, dreams and forgotten aspirations, nostalgia and the inevitability of death.

Wow. Just wow.

I love how you formed and developed this whole character without any dialogue, without anything really happening. The mind is a powerful place to be in, yet the story isn't in her head. It's almost like an obituary itself. A list of likes, memories, scrapbooks. And a memory of how we are what we are and nothing else. It's textual but rugged, almost. Much less romantic or emotional than downright barren, textured, real. Yet your writing is beautiful.

I loved it. I'm adding it to my favorites. When you take over the world, Katie, be sure to keep writing.