|Reviews for Castaway|
| iAmTheTot 11/10/12 . chapter 1
I like this. In particular, I had no problem imagining the scenario. I could see myself in this situation with every line, a new detail added. Very cool stuff. My only gripe is that I feel the rhythm on the line "Although I'm restless, I try to lie still" runs a little bit too long. Before and after that line, I read the poem very smoothly.
| Night Liker 8/13/11 . chapter 1
All the small details in the beginning allow a glimpse into the castaway's world and make it seem very authentic.
I love the way it ends. So very uncertain (as I think it should be)
Thanks for sharing
| Kriss-C 3/4/10 . chapter 1
This one was really good... I don't have your email address to write you...
| Written In Stone 2/7/10 . chapter 1
a perfect description of being an actual castaway. i love it!