Over all a very nice poem. I like the idea of promise in reality is a lie. I have a few suggestions for you.

and long dedicated eye contact. (This line is awkward for me; I don’t think you need it. Your piece speaks for its self and this just feels like fluff to me.)

It's simple charm delivered with ease, grace.

It's so convincing,

What is a promise?

These are just my thoughts, and me playing with the poem.

Sabriel

PS: I only play with poems I like. :)