Very sad yet very good. But not the BEST saddest story I've read. Sry don't mean for it to be a flame. You're good, but you can be better. I can't wait to read your future stories! ;) Btw I'm sure you can guess who I am. ;)

I like it :3

saddnes it was cool xD

omfg...this was the best...

so sad...

luvz it

OMG I think this was good

It wasn't overly detailed but it still had a lot of emotion and it's my kind of story