|Reviews for Downfall|
| Cayenne Kelpie 7/24/10 . chapter 1
A destructive relationship from the outside-not pretty. The second last verse was what made me love this one. Cayenne.
| YasuRan 1/31/10 . chapter 1
Nicely executed! The idea of the person in-between is not used often. It wasn't overbearingly angsty but just enough for the reader to undertsand what was going on. Good work :)