|Reviews for Just Another Fractured Fairy Tale|
| Punslinger 2/3/10 . chapter 4
Very good. Made me chuckle more than once. But if fairy tale fathers weren't dolts, they wouldn't let men of questionable backgrounds whisk their daughters off to doubtful happily-ever-afters. (Did you make a deliberate pun by spelling "heroine" as "heroin," or...?)
| Punslinger 2/3/10 . chapter 3
Some men call that marriage. (Of course you know that I'm talking about hard-working moms who are to tired for hubby's needs.)
| Lady Livia 2/3/10 . chapter 4
I wouldn't be kissing her. Imagine the bad breath of not brushing her teeth for a hundred years... :S
| Lady Livia 2/3/10 . chapter 3
Pretty sure I saw a movie take on Snow White before, where they guy actually had to.. 'make love' to her.. body...Hm...
| PerscriptionRevolution 2/3/10 . chapter 4
I'm not sure it counts as a poem with all the inserts, but it is a great story. You have a real gift for contrasting rhythm and prose. I find it very creative, especially the jaded italics. And, once again, you are so very right about fairy tale fathers. Never quite have much between the ears.
| PerscriptionRevolution 2/3/10 . chapter 3
Haha. It is so short and abrupt. I like the phrase "kissing lips on lifeless girls" because it has a rhythm that gets cut off at the next line.
| PerscriptionRevolution 2/2/10 . chapter 2
It was not quite as chilling as the last, but very true. The line about the prince made me laugh. It seems that the "good" characters are never particularly intelligent. I hope you continue this.
| PerscriptionRevolution 2/2/10 . chapter 1
Wow. That is a pretty crazy poem. I love the last line. It sends chills down your spine. I also like the form that you wrote it in. It's structured so that you can follow each thought and gives emphasis where it is due without having to fit a mold. Thank you for your review by the way. It's really encouraging to hear.
| Punslinger 2/1/10 . chapter 2
These are 3 nice haikus. If you wrote 4 more, that would give Snow White 7 short ones.
P.S. Thanks for sorting out "sought" for me. The sentence should be okay with the correction.
| Punslinger 2/1/10 . chapter 1
Aw, poor little Cindy! I wish I could be her Prince Charming. Nice poem with a new twist on the old story.
| Mirabella 2/1/10 . chapter 2
See? You write awesome poetry! It's brilliant and profound!
Can Anastasia be next? :)
| Mirabella 2/1/10 . chapter 1
You do like your tragedies! :)
And this is a beauty! Love it! You have a talent dear Weasel!
| Lady Livia 2/1/10 . chapter 1
The word that came to mind when i finished reading this was "Bummer..."
| Lady Livia 2/1/10 . chapter 2
fumbling prince's kiss...
i like that.