|Reviews for Wonderland|
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis 2/2/10 . chapter 1
I think it's great. everything okay?
| I resemble addiction 2/2/10 . chapter 1
I actually really enjoy the last bit, and do not think it sounds forced at all :)
Stylistically, I really enjoy the first stanza; you make it sound kind of broken, urgent, and that fits in very well with the theme.