|Reviews for msn haikus|
| Manuel Fajar 2/3/10 . chapter 3
moon’s glow held heart’s sway
pulling high, then low our love
cleansing black sand shores
| Manuel Fajar 2/3/10 . chapter 2
dappled red and brown
still our skin and blood remains
haunting paths of rock
| Manuel Fajar 2/3/10 . chapter 1
behind veiled eyelids
falling stars—veined nebulas
seal heart's dreams in flight
| sealednectar 2/3/10 . chapter 5
Like it! Made me smile. It was cute. Well done. Keep writing.
| sealednectar 2/3/10 . chapter 4
Oh sad. The speaker has given up. Chasing someone is hard work, perserverance is key.
| sealednectar 2/3/10 . chapter 3
Wonderful! Really beautiful imagery, metaphor and personification. Good work.
| sealednectar 2/3/10 . chapter 2
This is a really interesting haiku. Makes me think.