moon’s glow held heart’s sway

pulling high, then low our love

cleansing black sand shores

dappled red and brown

still our skin and blood remains

haunting paths of rock

behind veiled eyelids

falling stars—veined nebulas

seal heart's dreams in flight

Like it! Made me smile. It was cute. Well done. Keep writing.

:)

sealednectar

Oh sad. The speaker has given up. Chasing someone is hard work, perserverance is key.

Wonderful! Really beautiful imagery, metaphor and personification. Good work.

This is a really interesting haiku. Makes me think.

Well done.