Well from chapters 1-15 GC Book 1 leves you reveted to reading. Yes there are issues in each chapter but they are small and easy fixed. I think they add charm to the story. To say I like it is wrong I love it. When the GC Books are finished I'll bet that they are called clasic of our timein years to come.

Another good wide ranging chapter. I really want to know what happens with Cloud, Wolf and Peter.

The only thing I can comment on is your spelling. Some of the words you chose are either the wrong one, or you just clicked the wrong thing in spell check.

Besides that, this is another great development in this story. Good job.

“I am the boss of this outfit.”

Good one liner :). And yet another good chapter. It is a fine line between describing gore nastily and just describing it enough and you did very well. More plot and more clarifications make more readers more happy so keep it up!

Great new chapter (back when it used to be chapter 4). The short chapter thing is a good idea for this, but if this were a real book then I would keep it "feature length."

Interesting mixes and input of a major plot line. Everything is coming together. Keep up the good work!

I'm lovin this story! Thank you.

Bravo once again. It's intriguing the way you brought in a reference to angels yet funny how he calls it "wikipedia crap." And, as to what I said before about the cheeseyness, I felt that the exclaimation points where Cloud ripped off the biker boss's head lowered the formality of your writing, but that is an area of personal preference.

And by cliche, I meant that the start about some 'secret group' of people set up to find aliens sounded similar to a lot of popular stories, but with your description in chapter three, you make it out to be something new and fun.

And so, I feel that my criticism is rendered mostly moot by what you've written. (I still say that no exclaimation point is more formal) Great stuffs!

I love all the new character and that the vistor could be narth. i kinder miss all the space action but its good to see the beginning. on a final note, longer chapters please!

i love the western scifi feel 2 the story. this plot reminds me 2 the timetravel arc on star trek enterprise. its great fun 2 read though

A little cheesy with the exclamation points, but good. I'm lovin' it.

Nice. It started a little cliche, but once I got into it I started loving it. I've only read part 1 now, but keep it up if part two is anything like this one.

yeah, new story ;)
liked it so far.
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ooh, this is so exciting. 3 stories. i loved the way you switched between characters. the vistor sort of reminds me of narth. hope u update soon . x