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| Reviews for Lovechild Inamorata |
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   nickyO 2/9/10 . chapter 1lol at your description of how you came up with the poem. But "My Gods" I liked it. ;) |
| East-0f-Eden 2/8/10 . chapter 1 It reminded me of a recipe sorta like how to create a lovechild inamorata. It's a very beautiful and complex recipe. |
| KCanna 2/8/10 . chapter 1 I can feel the beat for this! And I can see the technicolor! Oh my gosh, I feel the rush! I like the "Oh the wind! Oh the wind! Little girl, yes the wind!" part. I also like the line, "let the nigh make love to the day." The Martians love it too. Oh, yes they do. You know exactly what I mean. Overall, nice job. Love the lack of pattern. |
