|Reviews for Spontaneity|
| Kb 8/12/12 . chapter 29
I hate you for killing off Jeremy. I hate you. I hate you! TT
I am literally addicted to this story. Amazing work 3
| Lawmpy 3/22/11 . chapter 43
Though, really, the author's note at the end was seemingly the most touching. - Very lovely end to the story, but it's so sad to see it be done. Completely and utterly finished. Though, I did like that it ended with 42 chapters - but with the author's note. . . it felt like this was the end for all of us, for us as a group, at all - and each death was like the passing of relationships. 'Twas like our own chapter together was ending, regardless of all the deaths earlier, it didn't seem to sink in as much until the last chapter and the epilogue.
I love you. You're amazing. Keep writing. And I'm sure staying in touch will be easier once I actually get a phone that's not beyond ghastly and I can stand to use, however unlikely that is. And congrats on finishing this lovely story.
| Nighthawk42 3/22/11 . chapter 43
Aah! It's the end. And I'm dead. XD I really don't mind myself dying, but why EndOf and Nathan? D: I can't imagine anything like this without them anymore...
About artwork and stuff and life in general... Thanks so much, and I'll message you later on Facebook or something later... I'd love to now, but I'm so tired...
Thank you for including me in your story! I feel glad to know that, if nothing else, I contributed to the group part of a makeshift flamethrower with something I would never carry on my person. XD
Congrats on finishing the story, but I'll miss it. :')
| Zuut 3/22/11 . chapter 42
This was so good. :D But horribly sad. (I'm so glad I'm not dead. I dislike the concept of me being dead, plus I'd freak out since I'd become paranoid I might actually die that way.) I especially like the narrative of the end and just the way it works because I think it tied everything together beautifully. It kind of gave me this image of everyone alone in the church (after reception perhaps?) with pictures hanging down from the ceiling and reminiscing. It's a cool sight.
Or maybe it's just because I saw that Taylor Swift music video...
Regardless, it's amazing and I'd like to thank you for the dedication and effort of actually finishing this that happens to star most of the people I know. Even if some of us have the strangest names.
| GermanSam 3/22/11 . chapter 43
I am sad that I was not mentioned. It seemed like I was the only one out of everyone in our normal group. Why did I have to meet you first and die in the first story? Sigh...
Ah well. The ending was different but I didn't mind it. I'm surprised that Katie and Lupita are so close in this story since well...I just see them that way but maybe you do. Doesn't matter. This was a fun story to read and be a part of (for the total of one chapter). Not sure what to say here SINCE I WASN'T APART OF THE END PEOPLE. *Cough* Excuse me. It's really not that big of a deal, just saying. Anyway, it's been fun to read and I will totally be around forever and ever to review anything you write!
| Lupita 3/22/11 . chapter 43
Yay! I got to stay alive at the end of the chapter! Thank you mariah for not killing me off! In the epilogue though, when you wrote and i quote " lupita is lamps new partner" I thought it was a whole different kind of partner! It's just like when you first introduced Katie and me...(you know what I am talking about) and ag who would happen to be the guy that I married... "you've known him for a long time . And I think I have a hint to whom that might be in real life..(cough, cough). You story was really good, sad that
I can't bug you anymore, asking when your going to update! :) well hope you like my little ramble even though technicaly it has nothing to do with review your epilogue chapter...well adios!
| Nighthawk42 3/6/11 . chapter 41
In that case, I am very afraid of the next chapter.
| Lawmpy 3/5/11 . chapter 41
As lovely as death is and all . . . *loves everyone in this fic* *doesn't think it necessary*
Chapter was really good though. XD
| GermanSam 3/4/11 . chapter 41
Okay I lied. I said I was too lazy to review and yet...here I am. It was a short chapter so I figured, 'what the hey?'. Anyway, the line "Details, details" is just so like you. I swear that it's your catch phrase or something. And a lot of death in the next chapter? Really? Don't you get enough of sadness in HOTD? Why must it be in here...oh wait, Katie and Lupita have to die so they are allowed to and Jess is too. That's three bodies right there and I'm not sure what 'a lot' implies to you but I suppose I will find out whenever you decide to update the last chapter. Sad that it's coming to an end but it's nice at the same time. Good luck with your writers block. It's a pain, I know. Update soon!
| Lupita 3/4/11 . chapter 41
Really Mariah really! You better update soon! And hopefully I don't die in the next chapter! :)
| Lupita 2/7/11 . chapter 39
Woah woah there sam! Thinkin dirty there! Me and Katie are work partners not sexual partners but I totally see where u got that from! I caught that to! Thanks for the enthusiasm of mine and katie's characters probably dying soon!
| Lupita 2/7/11 . chapter 39
U just had to add a Mexican joke in the story! Jk. In the first couple of chapters of your story I thought my character was going to be a maid! I was like great soo stereotypical, a Mexican being a maid! :)
| GermanSam 2/7/11 . chapter 39
Really? The whole Katie/Lupita thing was written so it almost seemed like they were partners. Well, they were but I mean more than just friend partners if you catch my drift. Maybe I'm the only one that thought that...
I loved that I was mentioned! Woot woot! The 'Mexican' line gave me a good laugh as did most of the Katie and Lupita actions since they were pretty spot on. Anyway, it was good. Can't wait to see them die because let's face it, it's going to happen. There is no way you could just let them go peacefully. That's not like you.
Moving on, thanks for updating before Tuesday. That was a pleasent surprise. Update soon!
| GermanSam 1/23/11 . chapter 38
I found myself smiling throughout the entire thing. You including the fingers snapping! Yay! That was my idea! Well...I think it was my idea someone might have suggested it before me but I don't care, I am taking credit for that.
TWINS? Really? Poor Jess but I guess I was half right when I said that she was having a boy. Did she pick out the names or did you? Then really? Where is Nick going to go? I hope the hospital gives Jess some baby stuff because I don't think they ever planed for two.
My favorite part was the beginning when Nick just went back to sleep and ignored his wife because of the time. I could just imagine. :] Anyway, totally interested to see how Jess handles everyone and the kids or maybe that is where Nick's going? I don't know but I can hopefully find out soon
And you tell me that next weekend is too long? (Ha pun!) Well, at least I gave a date! You don't even know when you're updating! So anyway, I would tell you to update soon but then you will come up with a gazillion excuses (such as writers block) to not do so. Sigh...laziness sucks right?
So...thanks for updating and I will be patiently waiting for your next chapter.
| Lawmpy 1/23/11 . chapter 38
The twin thing made me laugh. XDD
And, really? This is just. . . . going to end? In less than six chapters? This can't happen. Not all good things must come to an end, you can find away for another story. :D?