|Reviews for We Wait for Spring|
| Archia 1/2/12 . chapter 1
I like how to me it appeared as one long description instead of short little parts. The last line ties it all up together which is really good.
| StoryMonster 12/29/10 . chapter 1
Skilled, select poetry and very good usage of words!
I like it.
It's really sweet too, I liked the line 'Some are covered by the sky's frosty tears...'
Maybe you could twiddle with the last line a bit? Make it slightly more enigmatic? Because the rest of the poem is great.
| What Happens Now 11/27/10 . chapter 1
There is one thing I dont understand the beginning , "Despite using white cotton as nature's tissue," is white cotton below the tree? I think it has the nice serene feeling you were trying to accomplish, though I wish you had put a few more words in, I'm not poem buff so maybe this was a haiku of sorts but it was nice in my eyes