|Reviews for Ab Imo Pectore|
| Peachesandcream15 2/10/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful dearest :) You don't need to change it, because although the end stanzas are different they work surprisingly well with the rest. LOVE the first stanza, and the vivid imagery you're creating through the language. The word choices are brilliant, the whole poem's very *ponders* alive.