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wo bu ai ni le 2/15/10 . chapter 1Hahaha, reminds me of a day a few years ago when it was snowing and the radio said the school was closed, and then on the next day we got told off for not going to school... But now snow is even worse! (Though I'm a bit sick of it now) |
no.peace.los.angeles 2/13/10 . chapter 1Oh, those poor kids! Haha, I know this feeling all too well, being from Wisconsin. Except now I just work and that rarely gets called off because of snow. A bummer. I love the title of this! Very nice. Keep writing! :) |
Princess-anna57 2/12/10 . chapter 1Haha, so cute! :) I love this one! Great job. :D Keep writing! Anna _ |
Humb1eBeginnings 2/12/10 . chapter 1Lol, I know exactly how your children feel. For the last five years they been predicting snow down here, but it never came. However, it snowed today though :D. It was such a rare sight. I hope your kids get that snow sooner or later |
thinking.about.thinking 2/11/10 . chapter 1Personally, I love February 'cause that's when my birthday is...but this is hilarious. The first line is uniquely awesome, and the end line is perfect. I'm adding this to my favorites. . .thinking |
BewilderedTeapot 2/11/10 . chapter 1Lol! I know the feeling :( I liked the alliteration in the second line, and the title is lovely. Nice haiku :D |
Punslinger 2/10/10 . chapter 1 (Chuckle!) Reminds me of all the ways I tried to find excuses to avoid school when I was a kid. But February, Feb-brr-uary, or anyway you spell it is only 4 syllables. |