I Loved the last two stanzas:] Well written and third and fourth ones had a few problems, though, You kinda changed the rhyme scheme in the fourth one and the syllables in the third were a bit off. It was a little distracting, but otherwise beautiful:)

Keep it up!

Well done, I like the symbolism in it, especially in the third verse. It's difficult to describe what the poem's about, which in my mind indicates a good choice of subject matter (it's when I write about something, anyway). Keep it up!

'0 good work