at first it seemed like it was just dragging on and on, but once you got to the ending of it, everything seemed to fit together perfectly, great job.

something always gets in the way; I know how that feels. your boyfriend giving you problems?

"I want to cry until I can’t fucking breathe, so make me scream until my lungs bleed." This opening line is so intense. Wow. The pain here is quite hard-hitting.

wow, this is quite intense. i like the imagery of ripping yourself apart. i like the ending, but i think you could definitely add more before in comes.

this is wonderful.

-sunshine