|Reviews for Forehead|
| Nuitdemeztli 7/26/12 . chapter 9
I feel bad for Jonh. I didnt understand if the model guy, the redhead and the cheater were the same as the guy that received the pictures of the dead animals.
| 14582 4/28/12 . chapter 9
| youbugme22 4/9/10 . chapter 9
You're a very talented writer. Your style is so haunting and artistic. And I feel like this is the end, but I sure hope it isn't.
| WishmiesterBeta 4/9/10 . chapter 9
The last two large paragraphs are my favorite. You write in such a beautiful way.
Everything in the universe has been reminding me that I have to eat, come lunch. Reading this makes me want to go back home where I can not eat. I'm confused as to what I think of the secondary charachters, or whatever they're called. That guy with the girlfriend
| JessicaKrystal 4/8/10 . chapter 9
'Such an ugly prison your skin becomes and you feel you touch humanity by it's core.". That line is amazing. Great work with this chapter, though I can't really tell if it's the end. I hope it's not, though. I love it.
| fynnagin 4/7/10 . chapter 9
I really love this story. It makes me sad. I can't tell if this chapter is the end or not - he didn't kill himself did he? Your writing is so thoughtlike, dreamlike, psychotic in a way, in this story, (not an insult I swear...lol) Sometimes it confuses me when I can't tell who's POV it is. But it's entirely lovely. keep going darling
| annouska 4/7/10 . chapter 9
This chapter spoke straight to my soul. Amazing. You can relate feelings so well through your writing, I would have never thought!
| JessicaKrystal 4/3/10 . chapter 8
Absolutely amazing. It's hard to follow, but once you get the hang of it... Woah. Keep it up!
| Indigo Masquerade 3/24/10 . chapter 8
This is the weirdest, most confusing, amazing story I've read in ages. I love your writing style, its so offbeat, not like anything I've seen before.
I love the darkness of this piece, how with only a few short paragraphs per chapter I feel like I know the characters even though really I don't know them at all. Forehead is esspecially intriguing to me.
Beautiful. I really have no complaints and I usually do. I can't wait for an update.
| Xyradis 3/20/10 . chapter 8
He's such a strange character, you think you know him one second and he thinks something completly different the next. )
It makes me sad how he tries to push the idea of love away but it feels like somehow he wants it, maybe in different circumstances.
my favorite part :)
"I smoked to hurt my lungs. I drank to empty my insides. I manipulated situation to feel guilty. I watched Bruce Willis movies, for God's sake.
Then he came along. And fucked up my plans. I am the one to blame, I let it happened. I thought I could control it. Make myself believe my own lies and then kill the idea, like I have done many times before. Just kissing the ugly guys.
I belong now. I am in love now. And I hate myself for it."
| annouska 3/19/10 . chapter 8
It's funny how what he thought he wanted didn't make him happy when he got it. Forehead is sort of a complex character, but then he's really true. I like the way he experienced sex. It's not that I agree exactly, but the way you wrote about it is simple and straight-forward, and I can see why he would feel like it wasn't love. All his fears, and stereotypes are so mixed up with his feelings! Or, at least, that's the way I understand it!
When you update you really make my day! Even if I'm in my blues, like today!(How would a dark story like this make my day, you wonder? So do I!)
| FeyXMixer 3/18/10 . chapter 7
I loved your story. Somehow you managed to project someones brains onto paper and it wasn't too overwhelming. Simply satisfying. Please write more, your stories are wonderful.
| Miz Mizery 3/10/10 . chapter 7
Well, it is certainly not cleared up, but I read some other reviews and found those a tad bit helpful. I like how it's all, like, a one track thing. This guy doesn't let anyone else interfere with his thoughts, and it's unique and nice.
| annouska 3/9/10 . chapter 7
God, I'm struggling with words here! This was... wonderful! I think that description will have to do. Really, it's brilliant, my heart started racing when I read it!
| annouska 3/7/10 . chapter 6
This is seriously good. It takes some thinking to figure out what you're saying, but I really like it. It's blatant and just so real. Thanks. It's refreshing, somehow. (and kind of disturbing?)