I feel bad for Jonh. I didnt understand if the model guy, the redhead and the cheater were the same as the guy that received the pictures of the dead animals.

beautiful.

You're a very talented writer. Your style is so haunting and artistic. And I feel like this is the end, but I sure hope it isn't.

The last two large paragraphs are my favorite. You write in such a beautiful way.

Everything in the universe has been reminding me that I have to eat, come lunch. Reading this makes me want to go back home where I can not eat. I'm confused as to what I think of the secondary charachters, or whatever they're called. That guy with the girlfriend

'Such an ugly prison your skin becomes and you feel you touch humanity by it's core.". That line is amazing. Great work with this chapter, though I can't really tell if it's the end. I hope it's not, though. I love it.

I really love this story. It makes me sad. I can't tell if this chapter is the end or not - he didn't kill himself did he? Your writing is so thoughtlike, dreamlike, psychotic in a way, in this story, (not an insult I swear...lol) Sometimes it confuses me when I can't tell who's POV it is. But it's entirely lovely. keep going darling

This chapter spoke straight to my soul. Amazing. You can relate feelings so well through your writing, I would have never thought!

Absolutely amazing. It's hard to follow, but once you get the hang of it... Woah. Keep it up!

This is the weirdest, most confusing, amazing story I've read in ages. I love your writing style, its so offbeat, not like anything I've seen before.

I love the darkness of this piece, how with only a few short paragraphs per chapter I feel like I know the characters even though really I don't know them at all. Forehead is esspecially intriguing to me.

Beautiful. I really have no complaints and I usually do. I can't wait for an update.

He's such a strange character, you think you know him one second and he thinks something completly different the next. )

It makes me sad how he tries to push the idea of love away but it feels like somehow he wants it, maybe in different circumstances.

my favorite part :)

"I smoked to hurt my lungs. I drank to empty my insides. I manipulated situation to feel guilty. I watched Bruce Willis movies, for God's sake.

Then he came along. And fucked up my plans. I am the one to blame, I let it happened. I thought I could control it. Make myself believe my own lies and then kill the idea, like I have done many times before. Just kissing the ugly guys.

I belong now. I am in love now. And I hate myself for it."

It's funny how what he thought he wanted didn't make him happy when he got it. Forehead is sort of a complex character, but then he's really true. I like the way he experienced sex. It's not that I agree exactly, but the way you wrote about it is simple and straight-forward, and I can see why he would feel like it wasn't love. All his fears, and stereotypes are so mixed up with his feelings! Or, at least, that's the way I understand it!

When you update you really make my day! Even if I'm in my blues, like today!(How would a dark story like this make my day, you wonder? So do I!)

I loved your story. Somehow you managed to project someones brains onto paper and it wasn't too overwhelming. Simply satisfying. Please write more, your stories are wonderful.

Well, it is certainly not cleared up, but I read some other reviews and found those a tad bit helpful. I like how it's all, like, a one track thing. This guy doesn't let anyone else interfere with his thoughts, and it's unique and nice.

God, I'm struggling with words here! This was... wonderful! I think that description will have to do. Really, it's brilliant, my heart started racing when I read it!

This is seriously good. It takes some thinking to figure out what you're saying, but I really like it. It's blatant and just so real. Thanks. It's refreshing, somehow. (and kind of disturbing?)