Kinda of an interesting twist. The Bible references make more intriguing.

SirScott

I like this story. This main character interests me. The little details and descriptions that you add really help set the scene.

poor guy...

dum dum dum...

yay!

that's always good. they live forever. So no need to worry what happens when you grow old and wrinkly and are afriad you will die while having sex...

figures... i should have guessed...

Sorry for not reviewing eariler. I've been a busy bee! :) Haha.

Anyway, again LOVELY chapter. Keep up the great work.

I don't know why I point this out but I HAVE TO.

Death, Verity thought. He's singing about death…

LOL. I love it!

hhaha what a coincidence with the name! hahah

anyways... please update ASAP!

Can't wait for more

Happy Easter. I really don't have much to say, only that I'm really enjoying this story thus far. As far the Twlight character's name appearing in this story is kinda weird thing, but there's a lot of unexplainable events in this world.

SirScott

This chapter explains a lot of things and raises some new questions. Verity and Riley play off each other quite well.

SirScott

Awe! :) I love this chapter. My favourite so far. I love Riley's characther, he so strange... And cool. LOL. _

"Don't worry. I won't snack on you if I get hungry."

OMG! Please update ASAP

Oh come on! thats just mean! why did you have to leave it right there, im come on! haha I like this chapter some of th plot is coming out and i can't wait to find out who the Ashlings are. Can't wait to read more :)

Creepy chapter. It answered a lot of questions about Verity's past. I liked the reference to Pilgrim's Progress.

SirScott

I kinda understand why this chapter scared you cause it kinda slightly scared me. :) LOL.

I'm loving this ongoing suspense! LOVE IT! Ahaha.