| Reviews for Raven |
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Punslinger 5/6/10 . chapter 1One grammar mistake/"has" for "have" disenchants not/your stark raven spell. |
FelleLLoyd 3/4/10 . chapter 1The moment I read, "Those tales of yore", It brought me back a century into another world. I like that you can use such simple words yet express such lovely imagery. Great work. |
Isca 2/26/10 . chapter 1"Usher of darkness." Brilliant opening line; the tone is quite suave and sophisticated. |
frugale 2/14/10 . chapter 1This is five-star level awesomeness. YES |
A Dreamer in Disguise 2/14/10 . chapter 1Beautiful and poetic, I love it ] |
Humming LadyBug 2/14/10 . chapter 1Thumbs up for this. You took a simple word and turned it into a great haiku. |
Princess-anna57 2/13/10 . chapter 1Powerful and descriptive haiku here. Excellent! Write on. Anna _ |
nickyO 2/13/10 . chapter 1Great description. Side note: did you know ravens can mimic like a parrot. It's not common, but it does happen. I kind of think that fact coupled to their black feathers and largeness have resulted in their supersitious label. |