Amazing. :)

The description in this is pretty damn neat. There is a rawness in your writing, and the personality of Andie shines through in her every thought. I want to read more pieces in this style!

This. This was awesome.

Damn... you beat me to it. I was gonna write a story like this... lol. Mine was going to end very differently, despite myself I cannot help but let my morality crowd my love of the romantic story.

I do quite like it... I like Andie, right down to her profanity-filled dialogue. I'm about to read Forbidden (here's hoping you haven't re-written it yet).

Nice work.

Fucking perfect.

Great style.

Loved the self-deprecating humor; not too much!

And heatedly written, too.

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I like this. Nicely written, nice descriptions... Overall, excellent. :D

I love this - wish I couldn't relate to the main character, but unfortunately I can, and my writing about it isn't this good. Le sigh. Thanks!

I love it!

I read Forbidden and I love it too!

please contine Forbidden!

Hey!

I really loved this. It has a great story to it and a nice flow. I also noticed the way you changed your writing, it's great. :D

And about Forbidden, do whatever you want, but don't delete the old one. :)

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! D